Richwood Script & Media can improve 
Your Story or Treatment

When a treatment is all you've got, (or all they'll look at), it has got to be at its best.  This  consultation on your written feature or TV story makes sure you're putting your best work forward.   Need to Pitch it?  Get Pitch Coaching from a pro or a Sell Sheet that knocks 'em dead.

Have you just finished putting your verbal pitch to paper and found it needs fleshing out to stand on its own as a Treatment that inspires a bid?  Or have you labored over an extensive Treatment so long that it feels like a book and you need perspective?  Or are you an executive who heard a great pitch but need it in writing to sell to your boss?   Blair Richwood's confidential development can help:

Notes on-the-Page

Unlike vague feedback, Blair Richwood's attention to the writing shows up on your page.  Your Treatment is returned with problems identified, solutions offered, trims made, structural fixes suggested, cuts actualized, dialogue inserts suggested, and highlights showing what not to change.  The working draft is divided into beats, numbered for future reference and structural checks.  This attention gives you concrete tasks to accomplish in order to take the material to the next level, rather than just a list of theories or buzz words.  Or if you want it revised and polished into a perfect pro format, complete rewrites are also available in this hourly service.

 

Development Memo

You may order a Development Memo of concise notes on these foremost issues:

• Like an in-house study of your Treatment, this constructively explains what to do in the revision.  Each point assesses the strengths and weaknesses of the material.

• Questions are raised to illustrate how the Treatment will be perceived by the targeted reader, and answers are suggested.  A Treatment that is meant to accompany a delivered pitch (a "leave behind") is different from a Treatment intended to be forwarded to the big boss who didn't hear the pitch at all.

• The Beat Notes section elaborates on specific points as needed while indicating paragraph numbers for easier reference. 

Follow-up Story Meeting

Book a telephone call to answer any questions you (or your writer) may have.  We will examine your options, raise additional ideas, and discuss the next step in the process.  This may be a conference call for partners, often available after hours or weekends, all on an hourly basis.

 

Further calls or in-person story meetings may be scheduled as your progress continues.

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